Vision: You've managed to catch the essence wonderfully, and there's no doubt it's a baneling The presentation is slightly common, but at the same time it does the work and shows off both the motif and your skills.
Originality: I'm a little uncertain on how to rate this, seeing as it's fanart, and as such not your idea. So I set it halfway for undecided
Technique: Your shading is impeccable, and apart from a slight twist that could just be a tilt of the body and head, you have the shape down beautifully.
Impact: The motif is perfect for impact, but the background is lacking a bit of umph. I'd have liked to see something that would bring the baneling more to its right, rather than a fairly bland red background. You might consider bringing a bit of life to the background, which can be done easily with a bit of motion blur (of the background, not the motif). Another way would be to make the edges of the picture darker rather than lighter.
This is a really great piece, though.
Vision: You've managed to catch the essence wonderfully, and there's no doubt it's a baneling
The presentation is slightly common, but at the same time it does the work and shows off both the motif and your skills.
Originality: I'm a little uncertain on how to rate this, seeing as it's fanart, and as such not your idea. So I set it halfway for undecided
Technique: Your shading is impeccable, and apart from a slight twist that could just be a tilt of the body and head, you have the shape down beautifully.
Impact: The motif is perfect for impact, but the background is lacking a bit of umph. I'd have liked to see something that would bring the baneling more to its right, rather than a fairly bland red background. You might consider bringing a bit of life to the background, which can be done easily with a bit of motion blur (of the background, not the motif). Another way would be to make the edges of the picture darker rather than lighter.
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